The Thief

Walt: write a narrative with focus on a powerful introduction.

“The Thief!” yelled the old man. A young boy was talking to his mum about the thief that stole the lollies. They asked the salesman,

“Was this an old store with lots of lollies?” and he said,

“Yes it was.”

But the thief was ready to strike at the store like a snake, because he wanted lollies but he lost his wallet with his money in it?.

Two days later, he went to the shop again and he stole lollies for the second time but the man caught him, and the thief pulled out a gun and pointed it at him and he said, “Let me go before I shoot you but I do not want to do that unless you let me go.” After that the salesman let him go and he ran and he hijacked a car and went home.

So when he came back he went to the store and he did not see a line and he tripped over it and then he heard an alarm and the salesman came out with his gun and he said,

“You come here or I will open force.”

So the salesman called the police and they came and handcuffed him and then they took him to jail.