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Monday 3 December 2012

going to the beach.

Walt write a narrative.

Topic missing at the beach.

One day 5 childrens were going to the beach.
“One of them went missing the name was ifa. He was digging a very big hole so he can put lot’s of sand in. When they Got to the hole ifa was missing so koli went to find ifa,” Then koli screamed very loud because he was lost in the evening. Then siua came and looked for koli to say

“ That’s are very big hole you did. Ifa was wearing a black t-shirt and a red shorts and he wore goggles. After that they found Ifa and said,”

We found you said siua. The fourth boy or girl went to go try to find him but He got lost his name was moko luckily he brought a candle to find his way out. The problem was resolved when moko had the candle in his hand and went to find his way out.

What do i like learning from this
The recent i like learning from this is because If you get lost you cannot find a way out but if you are smart and you brought a candle then you might be the smartest in your class. I think going to the beach is very cool but if you get lost then we have to find you. Going to the beach could be fun but sometimes it could not be fun because someone could get kidnapped at the beach.

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