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Monday 8 July 2013

Narrative Egypt

Etai
Ancient Egypt

One sunny day in egypt I went to the pyramids then I saw the ancient Egypt king. Next I went to go and look at the river nile when I got there it was already flooding. The king was named josh. When I went there I saw Ra he was the god of the sun.

When I got out of the pyramids the river nile got nearer and nearer and nearer then it flooded in the pyramids.When I said the pyramids were flooding Ra came  running out of the pyramids. When Ra came out he tried to stop the river from flooding the pyramids. He said to me,”
Go far away from the pyramids I can stop the river with my I replied back,”
Why do you want me to go so you can be safe,” he said but you need help there is only you and your king that is doing the job. Next I yelled is there anyone that can help us from stopping the river.

Then I heard someone say who is that saying is there anyone that can help us from stopping the river. Then I listened to where it came from and when I went there it was another tribe of Egyptian people. Then I said to them,”
Can you come and help us stop the river from flooding in our pyramids. When the river flooded I got some people to help us. Then the king of Egypt said,”
Who are those people and where did they come from the leader of their tribe responded we are the people from your kingdom we have come to help you stop the river nile from flooding.

Then I saw a plane fly past and I thought it was my dad because when I left he had a big plane parked outside the front door. I waved my hand so they can stop and see what happened. Then it was time to see if it stopped flooding when I went there all the water was gone and the king and the tribe from his kingdom was gone too.

The pyramids were not flooded and it was the same way it was when it was flooding. When I got into the pyramids I saw the king lying on the floor I thought he was dead but when I checked the temperature of his body he was very cold. When I looked at the calendar it was my birthday.  

 

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