I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Miss Aireen.
Monday 11 March 2013
The sunny beach.
At the Beach
It was a cold day at the beach. I went to the beach at 1.00 it was very cold in thee beach. We went to the beach my mum my dad and my sisters. I went to the beach it was cold so I waited until It was 4.00 I got out of the car and then I ran to go into the water , suddenly I stopped and I said,”
Hmm what is that grey sharp fin I ran back and I said,”
Dad there is a shark My dad said,”
Yes there is a shark just in the car till it goes too deep end.The shark went to the deep end and I quickly jumped out of the car and I said,”
Finally the shark went out to the deep side.
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